tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post4917459696568903073..comments2023-12-30T22:34:42.378-08:00Comments on Unhinged...Seriously: Clarity of Night Silhouette EntryLaurelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-25067750605160585052010-02-18T19:00:59.001-08:002010-02-18T19:00:59.001-08:00kanishk: Too bad it wasn't something more...!kanishk: Too bad it wasn't something more...!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-15482294691108425582010-02-18T18:52:33.279-08:002010-02-18T18:52:33.279-08:00Hoyt definitely got what was coming to him! ;)
W...Hoyt definitely got what was coming to him! ;)<br /><br /><a href="http://www.workfromhomeindia.biz" rel="nofollow"> Work from home India </a>kanishkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13651620533023202224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-51977850875053183822010-02-03T08:05:31.542-08:002010-02-03T08:05:31.542-08:00TKx, Bernita! Still loving your Anne in the Tower ...TKx, Bernita! Still loving your Anne in the Tower piece, as well. It was in my top ten. <br /><br />LeR: Thanks. Dicksickle made me snicker, too. Probably my favorite thing about writing. It's a socially acceptable form of multiple personality disorder. Too bad Boyd's engaged and I'm married. Well, that and he's fictional. I do like the boys who make me giggle.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-35559690867264498492010-02-03T07:51:58.161-08:002010-02-03T07:51:58.161-08:00HUZZAH! Nice work. Also: DICKSICKLE!!!! OMG!HUZZAH! Nice work. Also: DICKSICKLE!!!! OMG!sarah mccarryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06092116746268072592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-82833379193351579802010-02-01T05:13:56.607-08:002010-02-01T05:13:56.607-08:00I like this one very much.
Your characterization w...I like this one very much.<br />Your characterization was superb.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-54422200661984598622010-01-23T17:31:36.386-08:002010-01-23T17:31:36.386-08:00Thanks, Chris! And congrats on your honorable ment...Thanks, Chris! And congrats on your honorable mention! I'm clinging tightly to my second round in the forties club :)Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-40474389011465045212010-01-23T13:59:23.575-08:002010-01-23T13:59:23.575-08:00LOVED this take on the photo! Your dialogue in th...LOVED this take on the photo! Your dialogue in this piece still cracks me up, and I've read it several times. <br />:-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-89016337089819133292010-01-22T21:42:58.142-08:002010-01-22T21:42:58.142-08:00Mahesh: I'm in! I love reading other WiPs and ...Mahesh: I'm in! I love reading other WiPs and can always use help with my own. <br /><br />Cheers, Dears!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-19180429426363258762010-01-22T01:56:37.958-08:002010-01-22T01:56:37.958-08:00I see that you are an aspiring writer or so i read...I see that you are an aspiring writer or so i read ;) Good to see that.<br /><br />Though i have a long long way to go on that road, i was thinking we should be friends and lets see how it goes..<br /><br />Becoming each others critic is one thing I see what we can do for one another.<br /><br />Do let me know.. :)<br /><br />Cheers<br />MaheshMahesh Sindbandgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099095274767291078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-83424383711887912902010-01-16T20:15:24.756-08:002010-01-16T20:15:24.756-08:00Thanks Amias and Janel! Thanks for stopping by her...Thanks Amias and Janel! Thanks for stopping by here, as well!<br /><br />Amias: I thought the spirit of your story shone through the very minor mistakes here and there. If you ever want a proofread, let me know. I am decent with grammar and fancy myself capable of understanding voice over rules. It helps a lot to have a fresh pair of eyes, especially when you know what you meant and that's what you see!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-87246867142361500622010-01-16T16:06:53.576-08:002010-01-16T16:06:53.576-08:00Love this story! I wish that kind of karma would h...Love this story! I wish that kind of karma would happen to everybody that deserves it. I'm sure the SIL was wondering what he is getting himself into.<br /><br />Thanks for commenting on my CoN entry :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00823616282284779390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-15579383622494292932010-01-15T07:07:13.490-08:002010-01-15T07:07:13.490-08:00This is delicious, and fun to read ... I loved the...This is delicious, and fun to read ... I loved the ending.<br /><br />I came by to thank you for reading my submission on Lidia. I sent in the wrong file, but I took my medicine like a big girl … it was hard, but still you saw the merit in the story, and for that I thank you.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-56797316320729378532010-01-12T20:35:54.962-08:002010-01-12T20:35:54.962-08:00Thanks, Crafty Green Poet and Mahesh, for stopping...Thanks, Crafty Green Poet and Mahesh, for stopping by!<br /><br />Mahesh, in this part of the continental US that silhouette is nearly always a red tailed hawk or a turkey vulture. The vulture's wings tip up at the end which is the only way to make the distinction at a distance. Red-tailed hawks, though federally protected, are very common here.<br /><br />They are absolutely gorgeous in flight and on the hunt. I had the privilege of seeing more than one pluck a field mouse or mole from our yard over the past two years. Noble birds.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-91995665048847099172010-01-12T20:20:50.478-08:002010-01-12T20:20:50.478-08:00I liked the way the story started between Boyd and...I liked the way the story started between Boyd and Hoyt.<br /><br />You interpreted as a Hawk..My goodness and when you said...it circled above..that thing was shuddering..<br /><br />Good attempt :-)Mahesh Sindbandgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099095274767291078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-32278864754719690512010-01-12T10:41:12.104-08:002010-01-12T10:41:12.104-08:00well done the hawk! Thanks for your comment on min...well done the hawk! Thanks for your comment on mine!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-49312879401646452902010-01-12T09:07:38.548-08:002010-01-12T09:07:38.548-08:00Ahh. Will not look here, but will read it over the...Ahh. Will not look here, but will read it over there.<br /><br />Thanks for your comment on mine!Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-3235189171860363862010-01-12T06:55:25.788-08:002010-01-12T06:55:25.788-08:00Thanks, Heather!Thanks, Heather!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7748612821639612993.post-49566557245544556552010-01-12T06:18:15.104-08:002010-01-12T06:18:15.104-08:00Thanks for sharing this--I loved all the details a...Thanks for sharing this--I loved all the details and how you wove in certain information smoothly. And Hoyt definitely got what was coming to him! ;)Heather Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06699360166269376285noreply@blogger.com